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Jaap STIJL's avatar

I tried making a fist that hard just to see if it works and sure enough, yes, little half moons! Excellent poem!

Clare Frances's avatar

Now you can make your own moonrise too :) Thank you very much Jaap!

Andrea πŸŒ„'s avatar

Love this! β€œChew them down

until I taste regret,”

Clare Frances's avatar

Thank you very much!

DayDreamMeUpScotty's avatar

The simple images capture the inner pressure beautifullyβ€”and devastatingly

KR (Kenneth Rosen)'s avatar

At your best. Powerful.

Clare Frances's avatar

Thank you Kenneth, that means a lot to me.